Takeo Masaki from Call of Duty

This is my first skin, it has a problem with my hands, the rest seems to be fine, at the moment I only found Dempsey, Nikolai and Edward Richthofen, Takeo Masaki was not made, 10 years ago only this trio was made by someone, and 10 years later, I'm a beginner who knows nothing, I started doing it somehow, crookedly and not clearly, I did it for myself, but maybe some of you also wanted to, I'll leave the model too, if someone wants to fix it and post it on their own behalf, please, I'll delete mine, you can criticize for crooked hands, not knowledge, etc. I accept that.
P.S. I also tried other models, they are mostly good for me, but it will be miserable for you.(the Persians are from the AA game)